August MacGregor

Celebrating Sensuality. Intended for mature audiences, 18 and over

Hot Chocolate


My first try at Weekend Writing Warriors, for a story or excerpt of 8 sentences. This one is a stand-alone story of 8 sentences. A quickie of erotic fiction.

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Hot Chocolate

“Will it ever get warmer again?” Lucy asked as she shed her coat.

“I know a great way to warm you up right now,” Carl said,” before spring gets here.”

“Oh, really?” she asked with a raised eyebrow.

“Hot chocolate—the real stuff, and not that cocoa powder junk.”

“Mmm, that sounds nice, too.”

Carl retrieved a bar of Dove’s dark chocolate and said, “And the best way to drink it is in bed … naked.”

A smile lifted at one corner of Lucy’s lips before she said, “I knew there was a reason I married you. I’ll be waiting in bed … and I’ll be getting ready for you.”


Author: augustmacgregor

I'm a writer of erotica and romantic fiction.

10 thoughts on “Hot Chocolate

  1. Welcome to the group πŸ™‚ I love this snippet and considered how bloody cold this winter has been, it’s very timely. Great job!


  2. Fun to have a complete story in 8 sentences, very cozy tale!


  3. Short and sweet. Welcome to WeWriWa.


  4. Very cleaver. You realise the challenge if for 8 sentences from a story, not an 8 sentence story…I haven’t participated in www in a while since I write mostly flash fiction. Had you written 9 fewer words it would have been a drabble


  5. Thanks for sharing this, even if it was under a misapprehension! I didn’t think they were married until she mentioned it, but very fun stuff. Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors!


  6. Ditto! Makes me want to go and try to write an eight sentence story myself.


  7. Seduction on the wings of a chocolate dove.


  8. Chocolate makes everything so much better, especially being naked. πŸ˜‰


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