August MacGregor

Celebrating Sensuality. Intended for mature audiences, 18 and over

Do Not Give Me Roses

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orchid, by CameliaTWU (Flickr, Creative Commons)

CameliaTWU (Flickr, Creative Commons)

Do not give me roses,
she said.
For what are roses, but in following
along with what you’re supposed to do?

Give me something instead from your heart,
and not from commercials.

Give me instead an orchid that is wondrous,
vulnerable, brilliant in its mysterious beauty.
Give me sunflowers that brighten my day
with their cheery yellows.
Give me lilies that fill up my home
with their sweet perfume.

Or forget flowers and
give me a wooden ring that you carved,
a poem that you wrote, a painting that you painted,
a song that you composed, a dinner that you cooked.

Or, simply — and yet, not simple at all —
give me a kiss that lasts for an hour and
tells me through the passion of your lips and
your tender fingers on my cheeks and neck
that there is absolutely
no other place
in this huge world that you’d rather be.

*****

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Author: augustmacgregor

I'm a writer of erotica and romantic fiction.

12 thoughts on “Do Not Give Me Roses

  1. Yes, exactly….

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  2. I still like roses best, but I choose this lovely poem first any day 🙂 Beautifully written

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  3. Yes give me this, something meaningful and different! Don’t give me what society expects or demands! Loving your poetry this month. 🙂

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  4. Reblogged this on bopeepmeetsmrwolf and commented:
    Wonderful. Yes, give me not things, but your time and passion, for those are gifts from the soul, which in turn feed mine.

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  5. beautiful poem… super like this for valentines… and I love sunflowers… 🙂

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